gre范文 salicylates_

首先我们先看看2015年4月11日GRE写作真题下载的部分内容：

5 Claim: Governments must ensure thattheir major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.

Reason: It is primarily in cities thata nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

结论：需要给社会主要城市提供财政支持，来保证其繁荣发展。

原因：一个国家的文化传统主要是在城市中得以传承和发展。

Argument:

2015年4月11日GRE写作真题下载28 The following eared in thesummary of a study on headaches suffered by the resident of Mentia.

“Salicylates are members of the samechemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to treat headaches. Although manyfoods are naturally rich in salicylates, for the past several decades,food-processing companies he also been adding salicylates to foods aspreservatives. This rise in the commercial use of salicylates has been found tocorrelate with a steady decline in the erage number of headaches reported byparticipants in our twenty-year study. Recently, food-processing companies hefound that salicylates can also be used as flor additives for foods. Withthis new use for salicylates, we can expect a continued steady decline in thenumber of headaches suffered by the erage citizen of Mentia.”

Write a response in which you examinethe stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain howthe argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for theargument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

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1. the secondary infections would not be surely hened.

2. represantative. the information of the patients of the study such as age and the characteristic of

3. different doctors: Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine was more profasional than the general physician

4. may bring other problems not expected such as side-effect

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1. whether levels of melatonin cause shyness during infancy and this shyness continues. Without scientfic research to expain the fountion of the melatonin to the infants.

2. 25 infants are not represantative.

3. study suffers from fallacies, the reaction is not the distress but the natural response to the stimuli

4. characteristic , many factors : the cinditon and experience

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1. lack of evidence that the clime in the region is really warmer, globe warming could not account for the temperture in region is climbing.

2. the report from local hunters is unreliable, because they connot hunt the deer

3. the temperture’s rise could result in the decreasing of the deer, deer can adapt the change

4. because of the overly hunting or the the pollution of the environment rather than deer being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.

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1. increase in the number of the factories was due to the city council’s decisions rather than some other phenomenon. The council actually opposed/ be against the increase but lack of authority/power to prevent it .

2. increase patients indicates worsing own to the pollution, 1. incidence was not increase but the number of reportors was increse. 2. disease from other area could make people be sick.

3. B was a factor to --- but not a key one , he may oppose the decisions

4. even if these all due to B . no evidence to support that G would be more effective to protect ---. Her ability

5. some other way/ methods

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1. no represantative

2. women feel much less pain 1.the state of the men’s illness is much worse than the women’s. 2.women might take other medicine.

Unless the experiment was conducted in a controlled environment in which all factors were the same for the men and the women, it is impossible to----

3. .1.without comparing the effectiveness of KO to that of other pain medicine 2. some other ways.

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1. Whether the salicylates could treat heathaches , dispite the Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin. No evidece===

2. study has serval fallacies. First , it falis to caculate the men with headaches but not to report. Second , it is because of the adanges in the health science

3. 但就算S真能影响头疼也还可能会有其他因素导致头疼上升，比如生活节奏加快、工作压力突然加大等等, press of the job and mood of indivivual

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1. study reliable represantative

2. hier is not own to work in the same place: higher paying better benefits clime

3. maybe some commen ones but not the most gife ones go to the B

4. different between two university

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1. a shorter hospital stay does mean a quicker recovery and a better care 1.the satate of illness is worse than nonprofit—2. freeing uo beds for other patients

2. the cure rate does not mean quality suffer from uncurable problems.

3. higher employees—patients ratio does mean better=== 1. ablity or competence , not the number 2. the effeciency

4. complaints 1.even though the number of complaints is smallerm the percentage complainting might be higher 2. openly encourage patients feedback

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1. the national levals cannot refect the leval of the satisfaction locally, It is entire impossible that residents of this town are quite satisfied with their vegetables , without excluding this possible , the speaker cannot rely on the national suvery to conclude that---

2. fails to assume that consumers are likely to grow the vegetables by themselves instead 1. they continue to by === dispite their dissatisfaction 2. they might buy them from special produce markets instead of supermarkets

3. a certain magazine has recently sold out connot indicate that people would eager buy vegetable seeds from GT 1. the newstand decrease the number of the copies 2. other newstands he stopped the stocking the magazine.

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1. highter percentage of graduates employed does not due to the fact that it provides== 1. GM sts are more brighter 2. GM is a larger school with more sts

2. statistics 1. fail to indicate the percentage of Gm graduates who find the employment in their major fields of study 2.the employment in MV is better

3. some other methods more ropriate ways

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1. statistical problem, how repesantative

2. fail to assume that responces themselves are reliable . the younger workers dislike to be supervised

3. supervison affects worker productivity. Similar at PPC

4. not all the old people are more experienced. It is not true for workers at PPC specially,who are young and experienced

5. would not se money . highter wages offset the production gains

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1. study 1. represantative 2.the number of people suveryed and the number of people responds 3.how

2. how much time passed between the two studies , the reading habits he changed

3. what is the literary classics : mystery novels can also be literary classics. The author fail to limit the scope of LC .In fact , all books written by writers past and made great successes can be called LC, there are many mystery novels such as Odessey he been considered as LC, Morever , each person has his own concept about LC. Therefore,

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1. study , the number of volunteers, the condition of facial skin , reprasantative

2. how lack the process of study mild soup comfortable wehter

3. some people might not report reality

4. lack of comparative group

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1. recent major roads not be carried out enough time 2.overall accident rate =\ the rate on the major road lacking the evidence of the effectiveness of the new speed limit

2. assume that all other factors affecting the hightway accident rates he remain unchanged such as : unreasonable poor wether and cannot enforce law smoothly and successfully

3. major Butler County roads still he a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago

1.some not reported 2. level of the skill 3. the condition of road

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1. survey

2. recreational use of the river is likely to increase when the water is clean

3. whether the water could be cleaned up for it has been polluted seriously

4. the publicly owned lands

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1. survey and people did not buy things in strict according with their expressed desires

2. people are buying the types of low-fat foot , while they are still demanding high fat foot in their dairy products

3. OD can raise their price to offset the declinig sales. Becides , the profit is a function of not just revennue but also expenses, They could decline expenses.Many factors influence===

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1. 论者是由P没有到过这里，得出篮子不只P有。但是论者没有提供任何确切的资料证明这里没有P来过的痕变，或是P的确没有来过这里。虽然P无法过河，但论者也没有告诉我们是否只有过河，P才能到这里

2. 论者指出河很深，而P没有船，大船的出现也在P之后。但是首先论者没有提供关于史前时代这条河的状况，有可能这条大河在史前时代并不存在，或是很浅。第二虽然没有证据表明P有船，而那个时代也没有大船，但P有可能使用一些简便的类似船的工具过河，比如木板。

3. 至于论者说P那边满是食物所以没有必要到这里就更没有说服力了，首先史前时代P那边是否也满是食物论者没有说，其次P不一定必须是为食物才到其他地方去，他可能是为玩耍或是其他什么偶然的因素。

4. 论者的结论很武断。论者认为P没有到过这里，所以这些篮子不是P的，篮子也就不只P有。但是就算P没有到过这里，论者也没有提供证据证明其他人不会把P的篮子带到这里来，比如说这里人，比如后人。Offspring

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1. new evaluation procedure when how number of responses

2. in the result of higher admission standards higher quality and facilities

3. poor job-placement record career service curriculum is unreasonable

4. even if the claim can substansiate all the foregoing assumption, the === is still unwarranted

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Improving the ecomomic conditions pleasant wether irrespective of increase in tax rate addition new type of tax

Lack of natural environment

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Statistical

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Suffer from more painful problems effect fewer man pay attantion to distression and fainty statistics data large enough

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Tourists will not be willing to pay for fails to explain hoe they will be able to pay for construction alumni would dislike no donation office space is enough

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